Friday, September 17, 2010

You Remind Me

You Remind Me


Of childhood.

Fairy stories of beautiful princesses and

Their knights in shining armour.

Sunlight and butterflies dancing across fields.

People cried, sometimes. Never for long.


Of happiness.

Bursting into song and dance in the middle of the street

We don't care what they think.

On a beach, the sea a glittering sapphire;

A warm smile and gentle eyes.

Your hand folds itself neatly over mine.


Of pain.

The prince has forgotten his horse.

He cuts a sad figure; limping along dusty roads

His armour scratched and dull.

The sky is overcast and the sea choked with garbage.

The people here do not cry

But they have forgotten how to sing.


In that one glance

You remind me of all these.



End.



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This can benefit from a LOT of comments. I like the imagery to it, but please critique so I may improve. Thank you. =)

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